SIPA's Best Writing Contest

Personality feature ( High School) Back

  • Place Name: First Place
    Contestant Name: Midtown High School - The Southerner
    Entry Title: Secret past: Pulitzer playwright to passionate educator
    Entry Credit: Connie Erdozain
    Judge Comment: None
  • Place Name: Second Place
    Contestant Name: Nation Ford High School - The Talon
    Entry Title: Lina Baki making dreams come true
    Entry Credit: Rachel Studer
    Judge Comment: None
  • Place Name: Third Place
    Contestant Name: Nation Ford High School - The Talon
    Entry Title: Thankful Thursday
    Entry Credit: Lilah Skovran
    Judge Comment: None
  • Competition Comment: Secret Past: The writer clearly put time into the interview with Edson to paint a thorough picture of her background and her path to earning a Pulitzer. The secondary voices contribute to the reader's understanding of Edson's personality and motivations. Lina Baki: This is short but it's cleanly structured and paints a picture of a ballerina who is dedicated her craft. I appreciate the creative lede. Thankful Thursdays: I appreciate the writer's creative lede. The subject's personality is conveyed by exploring not just his motivation, but his impact on colleagues, too.